main kuch bhi karoon koi tokta nahin,
teri aankhein daantti hai....
jo khud ko bhi maine kaha nahin
teri aankhein jaanti hai....
main chhalkata hoon jis boond ko
teri aankhien rokti hai....
hai baat jo jami seene mein mere,
teri aankhein bolti hai....
bhagta hoon jo kisi manzil ki oar,
teri aankhein bulaati hai....
sau baar hansaati hai yeh aankhein,
hazaar baar rulaati hai....
dekhti hai aise hansti aankhein ke
har baat samajhti hai....
pyar mein chhalak jati hai magar,
gusse mein garajti hai...
bas un aankhon ka pyasa hoon main,
kya wo bhi tarasti hai....
Manali... I would have loved if this poem wouldl have been written by my love! I would have kissed him on the spot.
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem! kasam se itni pyari hai ki koi ek baar padh de to ladki flat!
On a serious note bahut pyari poem hai
male expression kya hai?? yeh kahna chahti hai ki Ladkiyon ki aankhein zyada bolti hain??he he
ReplyDeletemujhe pasand nahin aayee.bahut repetative sa lagta hai padh ke.
main kuch bhi karoon koi tokta nahin,
ReplyDeleteteri aankhein daantti hai....
bas un aankhon ka pyasa hoon main,
kya wo bhi tarasti hai....
Beautiful Manali... bahot hi sundar! Chhoo gayi last lines ...