Friday, February 29, 2008

zindagi pinjra,tu khidki koi

pinjre si zindagi mein
ek khidki si mil gayi...
khwabon ki manzilein
haqeeqat se jud gayi...
ek darr,ek aas
ek anjana ahsaas....
khushboo si ghul gayi,
thi saansein udaas...
mausam aya aisa ke
fikr saari dhul gayi,
pinjre si zindagi mein
ek khidki si khul gayi...

7 comments:

  1. Main generally bahut diplomatic hota hoon... but this time...

    SAMAJH me nahi AYI

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  2. phir ek baar flow ki gadbad...
    shuruaat-
    pinjre si zindagi mein
    ek khidki si mil gayi...

    end-
    pinjre si zindagi mein
    ek khidki si khul gayi

    loved thiese lines.very nice use of sound.

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  5. Bahut achhe bhav, achhi panktiyan par kavita ka bahaav (flow)atakata hai

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