ek pal ki talaash mein
hazaron pal kho rahe hain...
zindagi se thak kar kyon
sapne bhi so rahe hain....
hai ya the isi baat pe
rishte bhi ro rahe hain....
ek pal ki talaash mein
hazaron pal kho rahe hain...
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rishton ki milawatein ho jati hai dil mein , benaam rishton se hi lehek jati hoon... marasim aise na bante dekha kabhi chhoone se pahle ...
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Pushkin is my mom's Guruji's nephew.I don't know him.I never met him.He must be younger than me.Just very recently I saw his pic... -
jab bhi teri ankhein bolti hai Urdu Urdu si hawaah chalti hai... aksar nam aankhon mein teri, meri baatein bhig jati hain... ek ghazal ubhar...
Kuchh maza nahin aaya. Jab chhoti nazm likhani ho to punch bada chahiye (triveni jaisa). Woh missing hai yahan. Lagta hai ki jaldi se likh diya hai aur revisit nahin kiya.
ReplyDeletemaza aya bahut maza aaya
ReplyDeleteteesre bandh ko chhod kar..bhaav uske bhi achhe hain magar lay gadbad hai...
pahli do panktiyaan-
ek pal ki talash mein
hazaron pal kho rahe hain
bahut hi achha
aur phir doosri panktiyaan
zindagi se thak kar kyun
sapne bhi ro rahe hain
very touchy
bas apni hi baat lagti hai...
jaadu hai jaadu
Believe me I don't have words to express. beautiful! shayad shabdon ki hi kami hai jo khud kuch nahi likh pati but this is more tahn just being beautiful. aaj itne dino baad aapka blog khola... kash pehle dekha hota!
ReplyDeleteAwesome, these are the only words.
ReplyDeleteEk pal ki talash mein
Hazaron pal kho rahe hain
wah
Jeete raho
abhijeet
3rd stanza change kiya itne saalon baad... ab shayad it sounds better.
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