yeh pyas kabhi bujhti nahin
registaan hai zindagi...
manzil hai jaise mrigtrishna koi...
tujhse koi baat chhupti nahin
nahin hai koi bandagi...
magar tu hai jaise khuda koi...
yaqeen bhi kya cheez hai,
buton se ummid karne lage hain log,
dhoondte hain un mein insaan koi...
nicely written di
ReplyDeletegehra hai thoughts aapke in lines mein...good
just keep it up !!
registaan hai zindagi...
manzil hai jaise mrigtrishna koi...
dil ko choo gaya yeh line
yaqeen bhi kya cheez hai,
ReplyDeletebuton se ummid karne lage hain log,
dhoondte hain un mein bhi dil koi..
Heart toching lines..
Keep writing yaar
GOD BLESS YOU
tu jo bhi likhti hai bas jaadoo kar deti hai...words par jaise control hai tera..
ReplyDeletetujhse koi baat chhupti nahin
nahin hai koi bandagi...
magar tu hai jaise khuda koi...
yeh lines to ghazab ki hain..khoobsoorat hain...dil se nilkli..dil tak pahunchti
अच्छा लिखती हैं आप !
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