Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Ajeeb Rishtein...revised

rishton ki milawatein ho jati hai dil mein ,
benaam rishton se hi lehek jati hoon...

marasim aise na bante dekha kabhi
chhoone se pahle hi mahek jati hoon....

gale ka haar hai ab kisiki saansein,
nazuk lamhon me yunhi dahek jati hoon...

sapnon mein roz hade paar ho jati hai,
paak hoon,magar aksar bahek jati hoon...

10 comments:

  1. MANALI JI APKE IS KAVITA KE BARE ME JITNAHI KAHU UTNAHI KAM HAI.
    MERE PAS KOI SHABD NEHI HAI JO MAI BOLU.
    KHAS KARKE 'benaam rishton se kyun badnaam ho jati hoon...'
    IS LINE.
    GUZARIS HAI A ISI TARHA LIKHTE RAHIE.
    UPARWALA DUA MANGUGA KE APKI KALAM KABHI NA RUKE.
    (LUCKY THE SAILOR)SUDIP SARKAR.

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  2. sapnon mein roz hade paar ho jati hain,
    paak hoon,magar aksar bahek jati hoon...

    ...............
    nice expression.........well said....

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  3. ek tapish mere mann ko chhoo jati hai,
    aur main khayalon mein dahek jati hoon....

    thanks for these lines phir se dard ko jaga diya aapne,phir aaj tanha bana diya aapne....

    great...it seems u are a wonderful poetess....keep writing...
    if you like to read poetries you may log in my blog ie

    http://mehktiyadden.blogspot.com/

    it is not as great as yours however I tried writing my feelings...thanks...

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  5. hi manali.... just went trhu ur lines on d blog..
    oh my god .. they are heart touching and meaning full..

    please keep an option to follow you...so that i can register my self as a fan of u..

    best regards,
    Mahanand

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  7. bahut khub mere pas wo alfaaz hi nhi k aap ki taareef kar sake...........

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