A gust of wind blew your thoughts away,
that was me...
could you breath me in...
you dreamt all night in peace.
I came in the guise of slumber...
It's right that the sky was bright,
Could you see without me...
I am the light.
suddenly a cloudburst snatched all your pain,
you are wet...
I am the rain.
Dear manali!!
ReplyDeletewho told you its not a poem!!
I dont know what but you are really very much expressive....
This poem is above than awesome.
you know you hv created problem for you now- you wrote above Par and now expectation from you is more than before....
very nice Manali...
i just want to say- M speechless..
I am reading the poem again and again and want to write something more...but m really speechless.
very impressive...very expressive.
take care!
wOw
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keep writing
hahahahahaha...Affi do u think it's a triveni?
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