kuch khaas nahin karti thi dadi,
bas rahti thi,
na chal pati thi,
na ab padh pati thi,
guzar gayi saansein,
rah gayi bas aahein,
saath rahne ki aadi
yaadon si meri dadi...
mil gayi pankh unhe
ya sukoon ka thikana,
ud chali ya so gayin,
suna kamra bhar yaadein bo gayin.
kuch khaas nahin karti thi dadi
bas rahti thi.
ab bhi rah gayin.....
My take.
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kuch khaas nahin karti thi dadi,
bas rahti thi,
Padhana mushkil; chalana doobhar,
aahein bharati; saansein lekar
khaali rahon to padhati thi
bas rahati thi
Sang mein rahati, yaadein bankar
Gussa hoti, na hone par
Chali jaaongi, who kahti thi
bas rahati thi
pankh mile jyun, panchi bankar
sukoon mila ho, unchhe udkar
garm thapede who sah gayin
mere mann mein.
ab rah gayin.....
kuch khaas nahin karti thi dadi
bas rahti thi.
ab bhi rah gayin.....
bhatka hua sa kuchh...
ReplyDeletemagar haan will appreciate your feelings and thoughts...
yaar in saare rishton ke baare mein ab kaun likhta hai...
thoda changes kar
Anshul ne achha likha hai...
magar maza aya
Dadi...very nice!!
Kaee baar socha, ke comment dun, fir himmat nahi huee..
ReplyDeletekyunki sach bolun jab ye padha pahli baar, I was shocked.. yakeen nahi ho raha tha, gussa aa raha tha tere pe, ya.. khud pe pata nahi........
gussa hi tha tabhi to maine subah fone nahi kara..
Jahan tak baat poem ki hai ...
I BELIEVE JO BHI DIL SE NIKLE WO KHUBSOORAT HAI.. JAB BHI SYAHI ME ANSOON MILE KUCHH KHUBSOORAT HI BANTA HAI.................
ITZ Beautiful
TC 'n' keep :)
बड़ी ही प्यारी कविता लिखी है आपने।
ReplyDeleteअच्छा लगा पढ़्कर.
i jus loved it
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