Kuch panktiyaan jinhe kavita banne ki tamanna thi: zindagi pinjra,tu khidki koi

Friday, February 29, 2008

zindagi pinjra,tu khidki koi

pinjre si zindagi mein
ek khidki si mil gayi...
khwabon ki manzilein
haqeeqat se jud gayi...
ek darr,ek aas
ek anjana ahsaas....
khushboo si ghul gayi,
thi saansein udaas...
mausam aya aisa ke
fikr saari dhul gayi,
pinjre si zindagi mein
ek khidki si khul gayi...

7 comments:

Amit RanjanMarch 1, 2008 at 2:06 AM
short & sweet :-)...
Nice one
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AfrozMarch 6, 2008 at 9:41 AM
Main generally bahut diplomatic hota hoon... but this time...

SAMAJH me nahi AYI
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Piyush k MishraMarch 7, 2008 at 5:30 AM
phir ek baar flow ki gadbad...
shuruaat-
pinjre si zindagi mein
ek khidki si mil gayi...

end-
pinjre si zindagi mein
ek khidki si khul gayi

loved thiese lines.very nice use of sound.
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vikasgoyalMarch 7, 2008 at 7:12 AM
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vikasgoyalMarch 7, 2008 at 7:13 AM
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vikasgoyalMarch 7, 2008 at 7:17 AM
Bahut achhe bhav, achhi panktiyan par kavita ka bahaav (flow)atakata hai
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SudhaAugust 3, 2010 at 10:13 AM
nice
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