tera khwab kyon pahnoon main
jab tu hi nazron se ise utaare...
dhool jam gayi hain rishton mein
chalo thoda saaf kare aur sudhare...
tu hi chand mein samaye
tu hi dhool mein mitaye
aisi uljhan mein kaise din guzaare...
badal hai jism ....
chhuan ki ek aanch se pighal jayega...
yeh dil bhi rooh talaq bheeg jayega...
aaj yahi bata de aye tanha raat
tu kab guzregi aur woh din kab ayega...
its very nice ...poem
ReplyDeletei can see in u r eyes ... gulzar ji
padh ke laga jaise tum ud rahi ho........khush ho... aur jeena chahti ho..kisi ki fikra nahin bas pyaar aur pyaar ke ehsaas ki khwaish hai.....thodi uljhal hai lekin khush ho.........
ReplyDeletevery nice thoughts.......
Admirable , excellent stuff...!!
ReplyDeletehmmm,
ReplyDeleteinitially i was confused but when you clered my doubd I can say...
A great POEM hahahah,
1ce again I'll say Poem is great not you..
dhool jam gayi hain rishton mein
ReplyDeletechalo thoda saaf kare aur sudhare
kya ghazab ki lines hain...
bahut hi saamaanya shabdon mein badi baat kah gayee hai yeh kavita..
achha likha hai tune...
bahut hi badhiya...
badal hai jism ....
ReplyDeletechhuan ki ek aanch se pighal jayega...
yeh dil bhi rooh talaq bheeg jayega...
great lines..m speechless